This blog post has the writing process for the Creative Nonfiction.
Alec Feinberg
Professor Mangini
17 March, 2015
Comp 1
Reflection week #6
Where revise my fee is not that she was the for the first draft it was okay but it wasn't like living there were showing mistakes telling mistakes grammar stag some said I could take Allison to like take but back in I mean it wasn't it wasn't bad for a first go but it needed a lot of work for the second draft I have I took out the first part of The Creative Nonfiction essay and got rid of it because it made no scene I mean it was going on about a video game and it had nothing to do with the theme of the story. I think I just put it in there so that it could be done with. I got to go to the first party as they started to look at what needed improvement on the essay itself so I turned it into my professor and he told me what to do what not what why can take out washing keep and watch improve on it was it was good so where the third part I added more showing to it so that it meets the requirement of the essay prompt that there are still mistakes that need to be and there's a lot more I think about two more goes through so that I get it right on the dot not just I figured I could leave it alone I think it's now I just need to get it done.
Professor Mangini
17 March, 2015
Comp 1
Reflection week #6
Where revise my fee is not that she was the for the first draft it was okay but it wasn't like living there were showing mistakes telling mistakes grammar stag some said I could take Allison to like take but back in I mean it wasn't it wasn't bad for a first go but it needed a lot of work for the second draft I have I took out the first part of The Creative Nonfiction essay and got rid of it because it made no scene I mean it was going on about a video game and it had nothing to do with the theme of the story. I think I just put it in there so that it could be done with. I got to go to the first party as they started to look at what needed improvement on the essay itself so I turned it into my professor and he told me what to do what not what why can take out washing keep and watch improve on it was it was good so where the third part I added more showing to it so that it meets the requirement of the essay prompt that there are still mistakes that need to be and there's a lot more I think about two more goes through so that I get it right on the dot not just I figured I could leave it alone I think it's now I just need to get it done.